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Desperation
June 28, 2007, 12:24 pm
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Booking Through Thursday

What’s the most desperate thing you’ve read because it was the only available reading material?  If it was longer than a cereal box or an advertisement, did it turn out to be worth your while?

I picked up a Highlights magazine in the doctor’s office once–when I was about twenty-six. I think that the magazine is best known for the Goofus and Gallant cartoons, the ones that were supposed to teach children the proper way to behave.  They took the form of two parallel illustrations with captions.  Goofus–you knew he was Goofus because he had messy hair–would do the wrong thing, and Gallant would invariably do the right thing.

For example, the captions would go something like, “Goofus comes home from school and turns on the television, putting his homework off until later.”  Meanwhile, “Gallant comes home from school and immediately starts his homwork (and sets the table for dinner and washes the dog and cleans the toilets and pressure washes the driveway).”  Or, “Goofus cuts in line.”  Whereas, “Gallant patiently waits his turn (and uses the time to contemplate his place in the universe).”

Now, as a child, I went for it hook, line, and sinker, but as an adult, I think you can tell from my parenthetical comments that my opinion has changed a little.  While I was reading, it occurred to me that Gallant is a major suck-up.  I’m sure that as a grown-up, he’s the guy who complains to the homeowners’ association because your house number isn’t in the regulation typeface, or the coworker who rats you out to your boss for surfing on the Internet during work hours, or the mid-level bureaucrat who won’t approve your permit because you used the wrong color ink.  By the way, I think I’ve just answered the second question above.



Perfect Moments
June 27, 2007, 10:08 pm
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Big BenThis time last year, we had just returned from a week in London.  This is kind of embarassing to admit for a European history major, but it was the first time I had ever been to Europe.  I love British history, so the trip was really special for me.  One moment that I keep going back to happened on out first day in the city.  We had arrived the night before at around 10:00, and after having been in transit for about fifteen hours, we just collapsed in the hotel room, so bright an early that morning, we were ready for some exploring.  We took the Underground from our hotel to the Westminster station, and by dumb luck, I picked the right exit, because climbing the stairs up to the street, all I could see was the Clock Tower of Westminster Palace (a.k.a Big Ben) rising up in front of me.  It was a perfect moment, because it hit me all of a sudden that I was, in fact, in England, not just reading about it or thinking about it.  I was there, and for once, I was happy that I didn’t have to use my imagination anymore.



I Have a Secret
June 22, 2007, 9:33 pm
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Sunday Scribblings # 65

She moved silently through the darkened barbershop, past the near-antique barber chairs, the cloudy mirrors, the old black-and-white TV, and the stack of National Geographics from 1963. A sign taped next to a nondescript door in the back wall said, “Legal Services Upstairs.”

It was almost midnight. After everything that had happened, some people wouldn’t have understood why she came there, but it was where she felt safe, and she just needed a chance to be alone.

Unfortunately, it wasn’t going to happen. The little bell attached to the door tolled, and her heart sank into the pit of her stomach.

She turned to face the man who stood just within the door.

“Dana, I, um, I’m sorry,” he stammered, “I, uh, I didn’t mean to scare you.”

“Andrew, what do you want?” she asked.

She had grown up with Andrew Hayle and his five sisters. He was a few years older than she was, almost thirty, she realized, slightly taken aback, but he still looked eighteen. It was obvious that he hadn’t seen the inside of that particular establishment in a while.  His hair was falling into his eyes. He also wore a jacket two sizes too big, and the rest of his clothes looked like he’d slept in them. He was out of breath.

“I, ah, I need to talk to you,” he said.

“It’s a little late, don’t you think?”

“Please, it’s important. Do you think I’d be chasing after you like this if it weren’t?”

Dana shrugged. “I don’t know. Would you?”

“Look, I’m really sorry about your uncle.”

“You know you really pissed him off with what you said.”

Andrew straightened himself up. “I’m a reporter. It comes with the territory.”

Dana shot him a look that withered him immediately. “You write for the Ravensburg Ledger, not the New York Times. Your territory is a little nowhere corner of Georgia where nothing is supposed to ever happen.”

“So maybe I should stick to reporting the family reunions and the church yard sales and leave the politics and the murders to someone else? Look, none of us have ever had to deal with this, or at least not in a long time. Five minutes. That’s all I’m asking.”

She sighed. “Okay, fine. I’m sorry.We can talk upstairs.”

#

To Dana, the office upstairs had already taken on the stale smell of disuse. The walls were bare. The filing cabinets were empty, and the bookshelves had been cleared. Only a few stacks of papers remained here and there, along with one or two personal things. Andrew glanced around the room until his eyes rested on a picture sitting on the barren desktop.

“You and your uncle?” he asked, picking it up.

Dana nodded as she took the picture from him. “I was nine. He took me to Atlanta. We were supposed to go to a baseball game, but I had more fun at the courthouse downtown.”

“And that’s when you decided to become a lawyer.”

“I guess.”

“So is that still the plan? I mean, you haven’t gone back to school yet.”

“They granted me a leave of absence until I can– I mean, I need– My mother and my aunt need me right now. I’ll make it up this summer.”

“I see.”

“Can we get to the point? You said it was important.”

Andrew began to fidget with the ring on his finger. “The point. Yeah. Ah, well, I guess there’s no good way to say this. I followed you earlier tonight, to that place in Henson Park.”

“You what?”

“You know, it’s not very safe there after dark.”

She could feel her cheeks turning flush. She knew the code. She could fill in what Andrew wasn’t saying.  It wasn’t very safe, because most of the people who lived there were poor and black, and she was a young, white woman from a fairly well-off family.

“I think you should go now.”

“No, look, I’m sorry. I know what it sounds like. You think I’m a psycho or that I’m prying into your business somehow, but I, ah, wanted to make sure everything was okay. I’d hate to see something happen to you.”

Dana glanced at an innocent-looking envelope lying on one of the filing cabinets. She had received it two days earlier. It contained three items–a yellowed article from the April 28, 1963, edition of the Ledger, detailing the disappearance of Thomas Parks, a white man; another, much smaller, yellowed article from the May 5, 1963 edition of the Ledger, detailing the disappearance of Emma Talmadge, a black woman; and a scrap of paper with an address and a message:

I have a secret.

“You can stop it with the Southern male crap,” Dana fired back, “I can take care of myself.”

Andrew, however, persisted. “But you wouldn’t go to a place like Henson Park unless you had a really good reason. Would that reason have anything to do with your uncle’s murder?”

Dana turned toward the window overlooking the street outside, hoping she wouldn’t see it again, her uncle lying on the sidewalk, a dark red pool creeping from underneath him.

“I really think you should leave.”

“I want to help.”

“Go away. Now, please.”

#

Dana slammed the door behind him. Andrew winced. That really hadn’t gone well at all.

He paused a moment at the foot of the stairs and pulled the folder out of his jacket. He had eased it off the top of a filing cabinet when Dana had her back turned. Anything relating to Albert Sands’ clients should have been gone, shuffled off to other attorneys, which made him wonder about the papers that were left. He wished she trusted him enough to tell him what was going on.

In the folder, there were several black-and-white photographs of two white men in their late teens or early twenties. From the way they were dressed the pictures had to have been taken in the late fifties or early sixties, but there were no marks, no labels, no dates.

Part of him felt badly about taking it, but he promised himself he’d do something to make it up.

Flowers maybe?



School Days, Golden Rule Days…
June 21, 2007, 2:56 pm
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Booking Through Thursday question:

  1. Do you have any old school books? Did you keep yours from college? Old textbooks from garage sales? Old workbooks from classes gone by?
  2. How about your old notes, exams, papers? Do you save them? Or have they long since gone to the great Locker-in-the-sky?

I have a bunch of my history textbooks from college, and a few on archaeology and linguistics.  They’ve actually come in handy a few times.  I don’t have any of my old notes, though, because even I can’t read my handwriting.  I cross my h’s and dot my o’s.  Then there’s the infamous Colomial Latin America class I took fall semester of my junior year.  It was at 8:00 a.m.  Not a good time for me.  There were instances where my notes just stopped with a pencil trail off the edge of the page.  Other times I would doze off in the middle of one word and wake up in the middle of another.  I made up so many new words that way.  Needlesss to say, I did not have another 8:00 a.m. class.



Recommended Reading
June 18, 2007, 9:39 pm
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I’ve added a page with a list of links to my reviews of books I would recommend for writers to read.  You will notice that none of them are traditional “how-to” books, but they all have something to offer.  They reflect my own taste, meaning that the nonfiction skews toward history and the fiction skews toward speculative, so they might not be for everyone, but I think they’re worth a look.  Just click on the tab at the top that says “Recommended Reading!”



Eccentricity
June 16, 2007, 10:16 pm
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Sunday Scribblings # 64

Stephen hated his jobs, both of them.  He would often joke that he didn’t know which one would kill him first.  At the end of the day, though, he reasoned it didn’t really matter.  Either one would kill him just the same, by sucking the life right out of him.

His day job he did because he liked the finer things in life–food and shelter.  His evening job–well he didn’t know why he did it.

It was Monday, and it was May, and it was sweltering in D.C.  It was also 9:02 a.m. and Stephen was late to work at Dewey, Cheatem & Howe, the esteemend law firm.  It wasn’t the real name of course, but it might as well have been.  Stephen spent twelve hours each day as an attorney helping rich people fight over money. 

He bribed the receptionist with a candy bar not to say anything, and he tip-toed past the senior partner’s office.  The man was already yelling at some poor sap on the phone.  It was gong to be a wonderful day.  Stephen slid into his chair behind his desk and booted up his computer.  There was a hearing the next day.  A bakery owner, a sole proprietor with a little store on King Street in Alexandria, was suing one of the firm’s clients for stealing his trade secrets.  Stephen knew that the client had done it, but he was supposed to be reasearching some creative way to screw the baker over at the hearing. 

 Around seven o’clock, he eased open the door of the senior partner’s office.

“Mr. O’Donnell,” he said.

“Yes,” the man behind the desk growled.

Mr. O’Donnell loved the law.  He loved it so much that the made up things to do when he ran out.  He once deposed a man for nine days straight.  He lived to bait opposing counsel into petty fights over disclosing documents.  No motion was ever too frivolous to bring, and of course, it was all billed out at the standard hourly rate.

“I have that memo for you,” Stephen said.

Mr. O’ Donnell sat up, took off his glasses, and looked at Stephen.  “You probably thought that it would be okay for you to hand this to me now, because you knew that I would be working late on this, didn’t you?”

Well, yes.

“I’m sorry sir,” Stephen said, “It took me longer than I expected.”

“Then you should have come in this weekend.  When I was your age, I worked seven days a week.”

Yes, but you’re a masochist.

“My apologies, sir, I’ll try to use my time better in the future.”

“You’re just lucky I wasn’t planning on leaving early tonight.”

But you weren’t planning on leaving early!  You have a hearing tomorrow!

“You’re right, sir.”

Mr. O’Donnell smiled, put his glasses back on, and returned to what he had been reading, tossing Stephen’s memo aside as he did.  Stephen sighed and shut the door behind him.

Despite the longer days, when Stephen left the office, it was already dark.  He walked to the Metro station as quickly as he could, but out of the corner of his eye, he saw the shadow of someone else walking behind him.  He turned his head to look, but there was no one there.  A few minutes later, the same thing happened.  This time, he definiely saw a figure duck into the darkness afforded by an alleyway.  He also saw that the figure hadn’t cast a reflection in the window of the building across the street.  He stopped, knelt down, and pulled the wooden stake out of his briefcase.  He’d be starting his second job early this evening.



Dessert First
June 14, 2007, 9:09 am
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Booking Through Thursday question:

  1. Do you cheat and peek ahead at the end of your books? Or do you resolutely read in sequence, as the author intended?
  2. And, if you don’t peek, do you ever feel tempted?

If I’m reading fiction, then no I don’t look. Mostly because I read a lot of thrillers and mystery novels, and that would spoil the fun wouldn’t it? The possibility of spoiling the ending for myself also keeps the temptation at bay, but I will say that I do get impatient and frustrated from time to time, especially when it’s a really good book and I don’t have a lot of time to devote to reading.

If it’s a nonfiction book, I will often read it out of order, especially if there’s a topic I’m particularly interested in. I’ll also often flip back and forth between parts I’ve made mental notes of, or I’ll start in the middle and read backwards to gain context. I know that’s not exactly peeking ahead to the end, but it does get odd looks sometimes.



Istanbul: Memories and the City
June 11, 2007, 10:08 pm
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I originally picked up Istanbul: Memories and the City by Orhan Pamuk because lately I’ve been very interested in the history and culture of Turkey and its predecessor the Ottoman Empire.  I also knew that Pamuk had recently won the Nobel Prize for literature, so I was curious about him as well.

This book is a memoir of sorts, but it’s not a traditional one.  It doesn’t follow the format of, “I was born here, and then my family moved here, and then I grew up, and then I did that, and now I’m writing this book.”  What Pamuk offers are snapshots of his life in a westernized, upper-middle-class, dysfunctional, Turkish family living in Istanbul.  Sometimes these snapshots are out of order, but they are always vivid.  Pamuk is always cognizant of how each phase of his life has been shaped by the millennia-old city around him.

I love reading books where the setting is almost another character.  Maybe it comes from growing up in the South, but I have always had a strong sense of place, and I love how intricate Pamuk’s descriptions of the places of his childhood are, from his grandmother’s perpetually dark sitting room crammed with furniture and knick-knacks; to the Bosporus, which can be seen from almost any place in Istanbul; to the empty apartment he used as a studio when he thought he wanted to be a painter.  Here’s an excerpt from a dissertation on ferry traffic on the Bosporus:

I find the perfect column of smoke comes with a light breeze, and after the smoke has for a time been rising at a 45-degree angle, it begins to run parallel with the ship, without changing shape, as if someone has drawn an elegant line in the sky to indicate the ferry’s course.  The thick column of coal-dark smoke rising from a ferry docked on a windless day reminds me of smoke rising up from the little chimney of a hovel.  When the ferry and the wind have changed direction just slightly, the smoke rising from the funnel begins to swoop and swirl over the Bosporus like Arabic script.

It’s just a detail, but it evokes and entire scene.  In the novel I’m writing currently, I want the setting to take just as prominent a role, so I’m experimenting with this technique.



Encore
June 7, 2007, 11:25 am
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It’s time again. Booking Through Thursday.

Almost everyone can name at least one author that you would love just ONE more book from. Either because they’re dead, not being published any more, not writing more, not producing new work for whatever reason…or they’ve aged and aren’t writing to their old standards any more…For whatever reason, there just hasn’t been anything new (or worth reading) of theirs and isn’t likely to be.

If you could have just ONE more book from an author you love…a book that would be as good any of their best (while we’re dreaming)…something that would round out a series, or finish their last work, or just be something NEW…Who would the author be, and why? Jane Austen? Shakespeare? Laurie Colwin? Kurt Vonnegut?

Agatha Christie, when she was at her Appointment with Death, Murder on the Orient Express, Death on the Nile, Ten Little Indians, Murder at the Vicarage best. There’s just something very conforting about a group of strangers gathered in a secluded country manor, only to have one (or more) of them turn up dead. There’s also something very nostalgic about her works. I suspect that even when she was writing in the 30s and 40s, the world she was writing about was already mostly gone. Her post-WWII novels suffered, I think, because she tried too hard to be up-to-date. She began introducing younger characters and including more James-Bond-like action. Those attempts fell flat for me a little. I’d like just one more gathering of all the suspects in the library for the shocking revealation of the murderer’s identity.



Not Enough Hours
June 4, 2007, 1:51 pm
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Why can’t the Earth rotate slower?  Salon.com just published the first part of their recommended summer reading list.  I want to read all five of these books.  Of course, right now, I’d just love to find time to do the laundry.